...as you should be proud of it. It's fantastic.

Heheh. Oooh they remind me of YRP...

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thankyou!

Thanks for the comment.

And lol, that thought crossed my mind while I was making this, it probably would of been better as FFX-2 fan art. . But it was for a FF12 competition.

Excillent tone in the girl in the midles hair. I love the bunny girl, such character I do think the bunny girl's legs are too stocky and the girl on the right's head is too small, but only a little bit.
On the whole this is a really well done pic Good background too.

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Swab the decks you sea dogs!

Good grief, I had this nice critique and compliments all typed up here, but then something strange happened to my computer...;_; I'll try to remember what I said best I can.

Fantastic, definately. I love your choice of background; it's very creative and fun. The wood especially looks very, er, woody, and some of your other works on the table as well is a nice touch.

However, is the photo folded over the edge of the desk, or what? I would have thought it would be hanging over the edge straight, cut cut off. Well, unless it has been cut, or maybe I'm just looking at it wrong.

You did a very nice job coloring; it gives a soft and warm feeling to the picture, which suits it well.

The girl on the right's jean shorts look pretty good, except the bright blue lines look a little funky to me.

The one with the bunny ears is my favorite, I think her face is the best too - it looks the most 3D. Although her thighs should probably taper a little bit more towards the bottom, where the photo is cut off.

It said "Advanced Critique Encourage", so I tried to find all the things that stuck out to me. Nonetheless, you should be proud of this piece, and it certainly deserves a high rank in the competition. ^_^

"Good grief, I had this nice critique and compliments all typed up here, but then something strange happened to my computer...;_; I'll try to remember what I said best I can."

Aww...I hate when that happens.

"Fantastic, definately. I love your choice of background; it's very creative and fun. The wood especially looks very, er, woody, and some of your other works on the table as well is a nice touch."

You know, the background wasn't planned at all, lol, the thought just occured to me after I finished colouring them. And to be honest, the wood looks 'woody' because it was a default texture in paint shop pro....lol. And thanks, I thought it was cool to have my other art on the table too.

"However, is the photo folded over the edge of the desk, or what? I would have thought it would be hanging over the edge straight, cut cut off. Well, unless it has been cut, or maybe I'm just looking at it wrong. "

I don't know...lol,

"You did a very nice job coloring; it gives a soft and warm feeling to the picture, which suits it well."

Thankyou so much, that is the effect I wanted.

"The girl on the right's jean shorts look pretty good, except the bright blue lines look a little funky to me."

Lol, I guess I kinda got lazy there. But meh, I think it works okay.

"The one with the bunny ears is my favorite, I think her face is the best too - it looks the most 3D. Although her thighs should probably taper a little bit more towards the bottom, where the photo is cut off."

I probably spent the most time on her, since she was so hard to colour, and I had to edit her face a lot from how I sketched it.

"It said "Advanced Critique Encourage", so I tried to find all the things that stuck out to me. Nonetheless, you should be proud of this piece, and it certainly deserves a high rank in the competition. ^_^ "

Thankyou. Seriously, thankyou for the critique, it's comments like yours that mean the most to me, as they help me to actually improve, rather than make more of the same.

You're very welcome, I try to take the time and make big comments whenever possible. Glad to see it is rewarding to the artist as well as enjoyable for me. ^_^

i see bum! lol but its really well done i'd be proud if i did this good of work too ^^